In which Aniki talks too much, TAKE 1
… and decides to list pros/cons for the ANIMATIONS of each video in the chorus battle.
Why? Because I want to.
Disclaimer: I am not responsible for any hurt feelings from reading this. I am not a leading authority on video animations, I just like analyzing animations, so if you happen to be upset, I apologize for making you feel this way. You’re welcome to just ignore this post. There is no favouritism in any of these mini-reviews, etc… but I won’t lie that some videos were harder to find cons for than others, which may result in very nit-picky cons…
A lot of these are rather informal, so again, this is not an official sort of critique or anything blahblahblah
If you want to ask/say anything/insult me, feel free to shoot me an ask or maybe tweet me or sth. I’ll respond to concerns you may have.
【VDA】 ピアノxフォルテxスキャンデル
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gw9YBtpFX3A
+ I like the textures
+ A lot of good variety
+ Consistent style and colour scheme throughout entire video
- Typeface of the Japanese type does not match the style of the video
- Far too little consistency between the different typefaces of all the nametags
- Chorus Wheel
【Nifleheim Manor】 Unchain
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=IU-Xz1B6Nm8
+ Tonnes of variety while retaining video style
+ Good transitions (for sections and type)
+ Thank you for remembering to lock to camera when moving those 2D spheres on a 3D plane.
- Intro vastly contrasted the rest of the video’s quality.
- The mass chunk of text at the end is in a type that may be slightly difficult to read.
- At a few parts, the coloured silhouettes are a tiny bit too bright.
【SakuraNoHanabira】 ライトラグ
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Mcfuq0lRUv0
+ I enjoy the summer festival theme for the video
+ Lots of variety
+ I like how the colour choices are similar to the original video.
- Quality of some of the graphics are quite low.
- Backgrounds are slightly overfiltered to the point it does not cohesively fit well with video.
- Lack of Japanese typefaces. (Default typeface isn’t a good choice to roll with)
【Masked☆Melody】 アモーレ
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=dtTYU5sKTZ4
+ I really like your type choices
+ I really like the style of the video
+ Very nice image choices
- Sometimes the glow colours are too strong and clash with one another.
- Some of the anchor points for circular graphics are not properly centred
- Not a huge fan of moving 2D images in a 3D plane in a way that you see how two-dimentional such images are.
【Veiled Vegas】 Jabberwocky Jabberwocka
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=TZtzXE8sTWE
+ Background textures fit the feel of the video well
+ I like how the background changes consistently (verses all have the same BG, prechoruses + choruses as well.)
+ I like your transitions
- Be careful that the typeface you use (Japanese) works for all your kanji, because it might be missing some. Some of the Kanji is in a different typeface.
- The paintsplatters felt slightly out of place.
- Quality/style of the volume graphic also felt out of place.
【・Code M・】東京電脳探偵団
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5A0ZOeaIZCw
+ I really liked the art outlines and the way they appeared
+ I also really liked the coloured checker graphics.
+ I like the look of the video that you were going for.
- Sometimes you zoomed in too far and the images/type got pixelated.
- The name parts seemed to be an a style that wasn’t too cohesive to the rest of the video.
- I don’t like how the instrumental break text does not pan in a straight line.
【Flawless Logic】 チェックメイト
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5A0ZOeaIZCw
+ Consistent graphical style throughout entire video
+ I liked the fisheye lens parts
+ The spotlight parts were pretty creative.
- Awkward pans
- The same image (The person who started) was moved in similar ways each time it showed up to the point where it got stale
- A bit too much unecessary camera motion.
【KirinHeaven】 メランコリック
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ODZBlgo-36o
+ GIRAFFES
+ I think it was really clever how the story is told to match with the scripting. (REALLY CLEVER)
+ I like the overall feel of the video
- The typeface used weren’t the best choices
- Background photos didn’t fit the style of the giraffes/rest of the video
- Intro graphics were a bit awkward.
【TheMoonlitLounge】 Between the Sheets
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Cx_oNhozXb0
+ I like the soft style of the video
+ Nice use of evolution
+ It’s sparkly
- Graphical style of the symbols and some name plates (wineglasses) were out of place.
- Some of the nametypefaces (the strong one with the blackglow) didn’t fit in well
- Background removal for many of the images were unclean.
【••αкυмє】 Lost Destination
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=N40r8SwMSV0
+ I like the textures used
+ I like the background used in the final section a lot. Most cohesive section of the video
+ The portriat graphics were nice.
- Some elements were unecessary and didn’t match the video. (red stripes, silhouettes, audio spectrum)
- Vertical bar graphics with the glowing orange borders didn’t fit the video at all.
- The moving texture stripes at certain parts were really jarring to look at.
【Clockwork☆Chorus】 愛Dee
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jjwjfFSxfXY
+ The ID/nametag nameplate idea was pretty clever
+ Consistent image set
+ Consistent video theme throughout entire video (Dance floor style)
- Background is a bit TOO static
- English AND Japanese typefaces don’t fit overly well
- The lyrics moving over some images and panning too erratically are sometimes distracting
【Hougako★Delight!】 アイドルを咲かせ!
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=SpewczjWEos
+ Emulates a dating sim opening perfectly
+ Amazing attention to details (Masking,cutout consistency,etc…)
+ Strong, cohesive transitions
- At some (very few) points, the images are zoomed in too closely and become slightly pixelated
- At some points (the characters in a scene w/ background) the characters moving in relationship to the background a tiny bit awkward
- At one point, when the images are cut and lined up next to one another, some of them overlap onto the image next to them a tiny bit.
【❥不思議NINE】 ワールズエンド・ダンスホール
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=38KtDUOzPf0
+ I really like the graphical style of the video
+ Lots of nice variety
+ I like your graphics
- A lot of the pictures are at different resolutions
- A few images are filtered and others aren’t (not sure if by default) but it creates inconsistency
- Colour balance might help out for some of the brighter images.
【Komorebi】 Perfect Crime
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=WhDOjvmcHRg
+ Tasteful use of particles
+ Good changing of elements to keep the watcher interested
+ I like the dancehall look and the 3D experimentation
- Tree sections feels rather out of place
- Sometimes the images don’t really fit well with the background images used
- Although the background 3D experimentation was valiant, the 2D images rotating on a 3D plane, again look awkward.
【Lilium Album】 Fall Into Unseen Darkness
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fooUZXbfu6k
+ I really like the intro graphic a lot.
+ I really like the consistent video ambiences presented throughout the entire video
+ I particularly like some of the textures used (especially the barb wire sections)
- Some of the same animation patterns repeat too often
- Be careful at some of your transitions, I see the vegas-cut-off a few times
- A few of the overlying effects are a bit distracting (not sure if intended)
【Royal☆7】 Mr. Wonderboy
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=oJxMSZRigOw
+ Background elements were put together well
+ Graphical style of solos look good
+ Consistent colour scheme
- Some of the graphics didn’t match the background graphics quality/style (ie. some nameplates in comparison to the brushes/evolution graphics)
- The horizontal cutoff colour checkered backgrounds near the end were slightly jarring to look at.
- Intro section typeface didn’t really fit well.
【Mystic♢Quartz】 夜空色シンパシズム
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-KIpar2zxgw
+ I really like the colour changes for the solos
+ Video style fit the song really well
+ Nice choice with the lyric typeface
- Got a teensy bit repetitive at parts
- Sometimes the lyrics were too large and distracting
- For the final chorus, when the images collect together, it feels like it could have been done slightly more dynamically.
【Midnight Charades】 サンドリヨン
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=RnCtSgD3Wdk
+ Backgrounds were well chosen and pleasant.
+ The white lace was a nice touch
+ I like the partial black and white look
- Lyric typeface did not fit the song or video feel
- The personal graphic to each person did not fit the video style either
- I feel like the actual name tags could have been placed in a slightly different manner
【Bag of Tricks and Treachery】 イカサマ⇔カジノ
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=EfqoukixGSk
+ Clearly displays who’s singing where (Simple and to the point)
+ I like the choice to have different images used as a group near the end
+ I also actually like the brief moment the half faces show up on the screen for split seconds at a time. Those moments were placed well.
- Background style doesn’t really fit the song and feels a bit static at times
- A few of the pans were slightly awkward.
- Nametag typeface does not fit video/art style
【Vanistiana】 Oath Sign to the Borderland
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Z7E3rGfs2ik
+ I really like the token nametag graphics used at the beginning. (The whole archaic greek themed graphic style/stone background + mosaic tokens were really nice)
+ Trackmatting the audio spectrums to the names were a REALLY clever idea. I’ve never seen that done before! (I actually hope you don’t mind if I try that someday in the future, just so I don’t seem like I’m ripping you off)
+ Graphical styles of both portions of the video were very tasteful
- Motion of some graphics were awkward. (ie, some backgroundstone and token pans in Oath Sign)
- The eye cutouts in Borderland were a bit too simple, and didn’t quite fit into the video
- Spacing for some of the rectangle icons in Borderland could have been evened out a bit more.
-TO BE CONTINUED-
I’ll finish this later when I’m not lazy











